{"id":886,"date":"2024-04-02T13:08:48","date_gmt":"2024-04-02T13:08:48","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/?p=886"},"modified":"2024-04-02T13:08:48","modified_gmt":"2024-04-02T13:08:48","slug":"the-flat-arc-third-plot-point","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/?p=886","title":{"rendered":"The Flat Arc Third Plot Point"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Since the Second Pinch Point, things will go pretty well for the MC as they move towards their Goal. However, there is an ominous sense that it\u2019s not going to be this easy\u2026 and they\u2019re right. Before they know it, they will plummet into the deep hole called the Third Plot Point.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:10px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image aligncenter size-large is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"1024\" height=\"1024\" src=\"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/04\/Copy-of-The-Second-Pinch-Point-Insta-1024x1024.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-888\" style=\"width:298px;height:auto\" srcset=\"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/04\/Copy-of-The-Second-Pinch-Point-Insta-1024x1024.png 1024w, https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/04\/Copy-of-The-Second-Pinch-Point-Insta-300x300.png 300w, https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/04\/Copy-of-The-Second-Pinch-Point-Insta-150x150.png 150w, https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/04\/Copy-of-The-Second-Pinch-Point-Insta-768x768.png 768w, https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/04\/Copy-of-The-Second-Pinch-Point-Insta.png 1080w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1024px) 100vw, 1024px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:10px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">If you picture your MC\u2019s journey as a line graph, this is the lowest point on that graph, which is why it\u2019s also known as the Low Moment or the Dark Night of the Soul. Trial will reveal someone\u2019s true beliefs, and this is your MC\u2019s ultimate test.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Let\u2019s look at a few things to consider when writing a Third Plot Point:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:10px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Defeat\/Failure<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The antagonist is going to appear to triumph, and it will seem like the MC has failed. They may have captured the MC and\/or the MC\u2019s loved ones, destroyed something (or someone) the MC loves, revealed something that wounds the MC in some way, or obstructed the MC\u2019s Goal with a wall that seems impenetrable. Any way you choose to execute this plot point, all is going to seem lost.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cThe Basket of Flowers,\u201d Helen degrades Mary by revealing that she is a banished criminal and subsequently drives her from the farm. This is a huge blow to Mary because it further scars her testimony (which she holds in high regard), and it also presents her with a dilemma: Where is she to go now? Without her father to guide and care for her, she is at a loss for what to do.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cPendragon,\u201d Artos agrees to fight with his loyal men against the Saxons (which means almost certain death) since it\u2019s his fault they\u2019re in this situation. This is exactly what Caydern wants, and exactly what Artos feared would happen.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:10px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\" start=\"2\">\n<li>Plot revelation<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">On an external scale, you\u2019ll want to save some juicy reveals for the Third Plot Point. You want your MC\u2014as well as your audience\u2014to reel from the shock of what they\u2019ve discovered. Not only will this effect them on a plot level, but it will also play a role in their internal conflict.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cThe Basket of Flowers,\u201d there is not much of a plot reveal beyond the fact that Helen knows of Mary\u2019s past. But since this is more of a character-driven story, the other events of this plot point still have the same, shock effect as a plot reveal would.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cPendragon,\u201d the plot reveal is Caydern\u2019s evil plan to get rid of all of his enemies at once\u2014and to give him the full allegiance of his countrymen.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:10px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\" start=\"3\">\n<li>Death<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">During the Third Plot Point, death should be present\u2014whether physically, or symbolically. Perhaps someone close to the MC has died, or the MC is facing death himself. Or maybe something symbolically \u201cdies\u201d (such as a job, a relationship, a pet, or even a potted plant). This will further drive home both the stakes and the loss.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cThe Basket of Flowers,\u201d Mary is reminded of her father\u2019s loss as she realizes how much she misses and needs him. Helen\u2019s discovery of her past also appears to signal death to her reputation. (Not to mention the fact that Mary literally goes to visit a graveyard.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cPendragon,\u201d Artos and his men are facing a battle that will most likely end in death for them all. Furthermore, the Saxons have broken their truce with Caydern, which means they\u2019re now free to execute Princess Wenneveria.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:10px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\" start=\"4\">\n<li>The Truth vs. the Lie<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Now, as for the internal conflict, the Lie will also seem to triumph. As the MC stares into the face of the antagonist and all he stands for, he cannot help but be reminded of the seeming weakness of the Truth. It\u2019s as though the antagonist\u2014and the entire World\u2014is taunting the MC: \u201cLook where your Truth got you! I guess the Lie really is stronger!\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">And the worst part is, everything around the MC seems to echo the same thing. The circumstances are bleak. The Truth has failed. It\u2019s over.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cThe Basket of Flowers,\u201d Mary\u2019s Truth seems to be crushed under the weight of the Lie. She\u2019s always believed that God would never forsake her\u2026 but now it seems like He has.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cPendragon,\u201d it\u2019s much the same. Artos has been sacrificing for the Truth the entire movie, and look where it\u2019s gotten him. It truly seems like it\u2019s not worth it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:10px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\" start=\"5\">\n<li>The choice<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">There must be a clear choice between the Lie and the Truth\u2014the antagonist\u2019s way or what the MC has believed up until this point. It could be something as huge as Artos choosing between dying with his men or living to see another day, or something smaller, such as Mary choosing to either trust God or become bitter towards Him.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Again, the Lie must look tempting. After all, the MC has lived his life on the basis that Truth will win out in the end. And now, it seems as though they were wrong\u2026 maybe the Lie <em>has <\/em>won, and the Truth has failed.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">But has it? Has the Truth really failed? Somehow, even though all the World screams against it, the MC rises above the challenges and objections. Their situation has not changed\u2014indeed, it may have worsened\u2014but they\u2019re determined. They <em>will<\/em> believe the Truth. In fact, they\u2019re willing to cling to it until their last breath (which is likely to be sooner rather than later).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">You may recall that, in our Positive Change Arc series, I told you to strip everything away from the MC\u2014all that he loves and cares about. I said that this was so the MC would be left with nothing to hide behind and that they would be forced to face their true nature. This is exactly what happens in a Flat Arc, except the MC will cling tighter to the Truth instead of embracing it for the first time.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">So, while death seems imminent, the MC\u2019s faith in the Truth has been strengthened, and they rise to face the Lie head-on.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cThe Basket of Flowers,\u201d Mary flees to the cemetery where her father is buried. And there, among the moss-covered, crumbling gravestones, she resolves to trust God no matter what.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">(Note: This Third Plot Point isn\u2019t as dramatic, since the story is mainly driven by internal conflict. But it\u2019s still a good example of this particular plot point.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:5px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">In \u201cPendragon,\u201d Artos deliberately chooses the impossible odds, trusting that God will give him the strength to defeat the Saxons\u2014<em>or<\/em> give him the courage to die alongside his loyal men (which, given the circumstances, seems the most likely of the two.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:10px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Here are a few more examples of Third Plot Points:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Despite the odds, Sophie convinces the BFG to help her defeat the giants (\u201cThe BFG\u201d)<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\" start=\"2\">\n<li>Auto injures Wall-E and dumps him\u2014as well as Eve and the plant\u2014into the trash compactor (\u201cWall-E\u201d)<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\" start=\"3\">\n<li>Will returns to his office and writes his will (\u201cHigh Noon\u201d)<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\" start=\"4\">\n<li>Leaving the Browns\u2019 house, Paddington searches for the explorer alone (\u201cPaddington\u201d)<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:20px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Comment below the Third Plot Point of your favorite book or movie!<\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Since the Second Pinch Point, things will go pretty well for the MC as they move towards their Goal. However, there is an ominous sense that it\u2019s not going to be this easy\u2026 and they\u2019re right. Before they know it, they will plummet into the deep hole called the Third Plot Point.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[136,5,4],"tags":[24,26,29,100,23,33,27],"class_list":["post-886","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-flat-arcs","category-plots-and-character-arcs","category-writing-tips","tag-character-arcs","tag-characters","tag-christian-writing","tag-flat-arcs","tag-plots","tag-protagonist","tag-writing-tips"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/886","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=886"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/886\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":889,"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/886\/revisions\/889"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=886"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=886"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/christianwriter.blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=886"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}